3 shot > rhino's perspective should have something trigger that point of view. (Cause and effect)- could hear gun shot or twig snap?
5 - 6 shot > needs a transition
Helicopter lift rhino shot > really emphasise this shot… have him swinging as helicopter rises up
CUT OUT other helicopter shot (too distant- takes the viewer away from rhino)
Last shot > Have him closer to the other rhinos - signifies he is happy and safe
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