Feedback:
- Make gunshot louder in the poacher scene to make it more clear why the rhino is blacking out.
- Fade to black after the opening shot, as it cuts straight to a new scene which does not make sense.
- Cut the opening shot before he turns his head back and then hold that frame a little longer.
- Redo the camera for the scene where the helicopter comes into screen.
- Slow down the black out scene.
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