For the beginning of the animation, the rhino should be introduced to the audience so that they can relate to him. Perhaps it could be a close up of the characters face and an establishing shot of him in the environment.
- Reduce the amount of environments
- Emphasise the shot of the dead rhino carcass and make it more graphic, the audience should witness the harsh reality of rhino poaching!
- Explore the different times of day... the journey of the rhino could just be over the span of a day instead of several days.
- Silhouettes for poachers, helicopter and establishing shot of dead rhino carcass (silhouettes should come in 3's)
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