Improvements to storyboard

The rhino perspective (RhinoCam) needs to build more tension and fear.

- Could work as a montage...

1. Shot of rhino looking around- to establish landscape/environment
2. cuts to it fleeing through long grass.
3. Sound FX of shouting and gunfire
4. Cuts to dusk, its feeding again.
5. Cuts to daytime, stood over the dead carcass of another rhino.
6. Cuts to fleeing again, and so on... untill it is established that the rhino is living in fear.
7. Eventually the shot of the rhino fleeing from the poachers and its hit  and screen blurs then fades to black... then sounds of helicopter and possibly narration about poachers over the black screen?
8. The eyes open, blinks 
9. View of beautiful landscape, animals grazing etc, other rhinos 
10. Narration about moving rhinos to a safer place.